My latest article for MASSAGE Magazine…
Florida Man. Heralded as the world’s worst superhero, he’s the star of innumerable headlines highlighting the weirdest criminal accomplishments the Sunshine State has to offer.
As a writer, I also find Florida Man invaluable for character-building inspiration, and sometimes he can even give me a fresh story idea. To help me in my daily writing tasks, I’ve even set up a Google alert so I can keep up with his antics on an as-they-happen basis.
Say It with Turtles
Say you’ve got an Everyman kind of character who’s not particularly likable, or maybe even a villain who needs a softening, humanizing quality. I say, make him a turtle lover. Because if you’re nice to turtles, you can’t be all bad.
Take this story, for example, from WPTV in West Palm Beach, in which a man leaps into the water, risking drowning as well as grievous bodily harm via turtle bite—”That would’ve taken his hand right off,” the article quotes an observer—to rescue a sea turtle snagged by a shark-fishing hook:
The story doesn’t tell us much about the rescuer at all, other than his name and that he was a bystander and that he “politely” declined to be interviewed, but really, what more do you need to know? He rescued the turtle.
Have Your Criminal Steal Weird Stuff, Eat, Hang Out for a Bit
WFTS Tampa Bay brings us this fascinating story about a 38-year-old man who broke into a garage, helped himself to a wine cooler from the fridge, drank it, then stole a tiki torch.
Great writing inspiration here. If you’re writing about a criminal character, especially one who’s not aspiring to greatness in that field, you have the chance to make that person really interesting simply by the details you choose. Was Walmart out of the good tiki torches that his wife wanted, and he didn’t want to disappoint her? Did someone steal his tiki torch earlier that week? Maybe he honestly thought this was the guy who took it. And the wine cooler detail is priceless. Any criminal who is calm enough to not only stop and steal alcohol, but to drink it while the crime is still going on is an interesting character I want to read more about.
Apparently, this stop-for-a-snack-while-committing-petty-crime thing isn’t rare in Florida. Take this story from 2016, also from WFTS, in which a guy broke into an apartment in St. Petersburg and stole $35, then stole a frozen pizza, then cooked the pizza in the victim’s microwave and ate it. All this activity left fingerprints everywhere, as you’d expect, thus he was caught. Good writing inspiration. Can you imagine the conversation he’d have with his court-appointed attorney?
Of course, this is Florida we’re talking about; sometimes you don’t get a chance to stop for a snack before you become one, according to this 2015 story from Bay News 9, in which an accused burglar hid from the police in a pond and was killed by an 11-foot alligator.
Let Characters Argue—Over Something Important
Shrimp. Shrimp is a good thing to argue over, as these Florida Men demonstrate in this KSL.com story that, oddly enough, comes from Rexburg, Idaho. The man who was arrested, says the story, was staying in a Motel 6 with “colleagues” when the victim took more than his share of shrimp, and a fight erupted that resulted in the victim needing staples in his head.
Food-related altercations happen often in Florida, so putting one in your fiction writing could be a very interesting and realistic way to enhance character development. For example, people in Florida have also gotten into physical fights over a Burger King bill, cold chicken nuggets, and 7-Eleven nacho cheese, among numerous other culinary issues.
Well, I’m inspired, though not in the lift-humanity-to-a-new-level-of-greatness way. Back to my novel.
Main image credit: GerDukes / Pixabay.com
I was 18 the first time I stalked, ambushed, and destroyed a cockroach on my own.
That’s probably pitiful, considering I spent six years of my growing-up life in Puerto Rico (where one of my major childhood traumas…er, lessons, was that despite all the scurrying around they seem to prefer, that cockroaches do fly, especially in shopping-mall restrooms), followed by several years in Florida (where one of my major life lessons was not to take seriously any person who says, “that’s just a palmetto bug”).
I’d stepped on a few Florida cockroaches prior to the beginning of the story I’m about to tell, but I don’t really count that. Number one, they don’t always die from a shoe strike, and number two, if they’re on the floor, the human already has the advantage, and they don’t often grant you that unless they’re already dying of whatever poisonous pest-control substance is around. Cockroaches on ceilings, walls, hiding inside furniture — those are the hunts that truly count.
So, back to the point, I was a grown adult human before having to hunt down and destroy a roach that was threatening the sanctity of my living space.
I was in my college dorm room, getting ready for class. Which in those days probably meant half actual work, half watching reruns of Quantum Leap on USA. Sitting there, I gradually became aware that I was not alone in the room, in that way that only people in bug-intensive areas of the country can understand. That slight flicker in the corner of your eye. Something moved.
I looked up, only to see the largest cockroach in the universe, some perverse product of global warming and genetic modification in a secret government lab, crawling around on my wall. Periplaneta americana, a big one, a member of the species that I now know is sometimes called “The Florida State Bird.”
Since this was my first time living on my own, I lacked some of the requisite tools for independent adult life in Florida. A can of Raid, for example.
With one eye on the roach, I rummaged through my closet for any kind of weapon. I dug through my shoes. Flip-flop on a vertical surface? That was no kind of option. Even if I managed to reach up high and flip the roach onto the floor with a sandal edge, that opened the possibility that he would become agitated and start running, or, major heebie-jeebie alert, FLYING, and that was not happening.
Desperate, I slid open my roommate’s closet door, and spotted some aerosol cans on the shelf. Vanilla air freshener! It would have to do.
Slowly, I crept over to the wall where the cockroach perched, way up high. Its antennae swiveled in that disturbingly intelligent way that they do, slowly and seemingly with distinct purpose. (See this X-Files episode for my theory about that.)
I aimed the can…and sprayed the roach with a huge amount of vanilla air freshener. As I feared, it bolted.
I panicked, preparing to step on it. It hit the floor. I stepped. And slipped, because when air freshener congeals on an object, it liquifies, and drips, and gets the surface onto which it drips very slippery. (Another life lesson!)
The next thing I knew, I was regaining consciousness on the hard linoleum floor of my dorm room, and the roach, heavily vanilla-scented but otherwise unharmed, was halfway up the wall and scurrying toward the door.
My right arm ached and pulsated. Slowly I flexed it. Pain exploded through my elbow, but it moved smoothly. OK, not broken. Probably.
I sat up and eyed the roach, which had paused about a foot from the door, halfway up the wall. Then it walked, slowly for a roach, through the impossibly small gap on the hinged side of the door and disappeared.
Like one does after hitting one’s head and busting one’s arm while acting like a total idiot, I realized I had to go to class. I spread newspaper out on the slick spot and wrote a note for my roommate on the white board we had hanging on the door: “Be careful — floor is slippery. Will clean later. Long story.”
I went to class, and my arm ached and swelled and bruised, and the roach was never seen again. Hopefully it learned not to mess with college kids, though I imagine its reaction was more like “ha ha” and then “hey, look…pizza.”
I certainly learned I was going to have to up my game if I ever expected to live independently in Florida.
Now I own this handheld bug zapper and it is great, and I have become the designated roach killer in the house. (I have two cats, but they refuse to get involved.) More than 20 years of living amongst them in this state has convinced me of the following:
At some point in time, every object I own has probably been touched by at least one roach leg. Think about that. Everything in Florida that isn’t sealed in airtight plastic packaging has probably been touched by a roach. And they’ve probably climbed all over that plastic packaging.
(Image by L0nd0ner / Pixabay.com)